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Message Arsenal

When to use this: You are about to contact a landlord or PM, or need sharper questions before fees or a deposit.

Build one custom first-contact message, or grab a standalone script below. Copy, swap the brackets, send — before you give anyone money or sign anything.

Written to fit any PCS — swap brackets for your base and details before you send.

Build your first-contact message

Check what you need answered. We assemble one polite message — and surface protective questions you may not have thought to ask.

Questions to include

Added for you: deposit terms— included because they protect you on a PCS even if you didn't check them.

Your message
Hello,

I'm [Rank/Name], active duty [Branch], PCSing to [your installation] with a report date of [report date]. I'm interested in the rental at [address or listing link].

A few questions before I apply or pay any fees:
1. Is this unit still available, and what is the earliest move-in date?
2. What is the monthly rent, security deposit, and total move-in cost including any application or admin fees?
3. Does the lease include a military clause for PCS orders termination, and does it avoid any SCRA waiver language?
4. Can we schedule a live video walkthrough with the address and unit number visible on camera before any fees?
5. Who owns this property or which company manages it — and can you confirm you are authorized to lease it?
6. Where is the deposit held, and what is the timeline and process for return after move-out?

I'm relocating from [current location] and will handle most of this remotely. I can provide orders and LES upon request.

Thank you,
[Name]
[Phone]
[Email]

Swap bracketed fields for your base and details before you send.

Standalone scripts

Eight focused messages when you need just one job done.

1. First contact with a property manager

First contact — BAH-ready, military clause upfront

Hello,

I'm [Rank/Name], active duty [Branch], PCSing to [your installation] with a report date of [report date]. I'm looking for a [bedrooms]-bedroom rental in [the area you're moving to].

A few questions before I apply:
1. Is this unit still available, and what is the earliest move-in date?
2. Do you use a standard military clause allowing lease termination on PCS orders (and do you include SCRA protections — no waiver)?
3. What is the monthly rent, deposit, and any application or admin fees?
4. What utilities are tenant responsibility?

I'm relocating from [current location] and will need to handle most of this remotely. I have stable BAH-based income and can provide orders and LES upon request.

Thank you,
[Name]
[Phone]
[Email]

Signals stable BAH income and military-aware tenant. Forces availability, move-in date, and clause answer before you invest time.

2. Request a live video walkthrough

Live video walkthrough with verification

Hi [Name],

Before I pay an application fee or deposit, I need a live video walkthrough of the exact unit at [full street address, city, state, zip].

Please:
- Walk through every room live (not a pre-recorded video)
- Show the street number and unit number on camera
- Show water running, lights working, and any damage
- Confirm you are the owner or authorized property manager for this address

I'm PCSing from out of state and will not send money until I complete this walkthrough and verify ownership.

Available times (your time zone): [list 2–3 windows]

Thanks,
[Name]

Legitimate landlords can show the property live. Ask them to verify address and unit number on camera — scammers cannot.

3. Confirm military clause and SCRA in writing

Military clause + SCRA — before any fee

Hi [Name],

Before I submit an application or pay any fees, please confirm in writing (email is fine):

1. The lease includes a military clause allowing termination without penalty on PCS orders with proper notice and documentation.
2. The lease does NOT include an SCRA waiver or any language that limits my Servicemembers Civil Relief Act protections.

If you can confirm both, I'll proceed with the application. If not, I'll need to pass.

Thank you,
[Name]

Gets it in writing before application fees. If they refuse or send an SCRA waiver, walk away and ask JAG.

4. Confirm pet policy before applying

Pet policy — full picture upfront

Hi [Name],

We are PCSing with a [breed/weight] dog (and [cat/other if applicable]). Before we apply:

1. Are pets allowed at this property?
2. Any breed or weight restrictions?
3. What is the pet deposit (refundable or not)?
4. Is there monthly pet rent?
5. Is there a pet addendum to the lease I can review?

We will not apply until we have clear written answers. Thank you.

[Name]

Stops you from wasting application fees on homes that will reject your dog. Get breed, weight, deposit, and monthly pet rent in writing.

5. Push back — apply and pay after viewing

No fee before verified showing

Hi [Name],

I understand you want qualified applicants, but I will not pay an application fee or deposit before I have either an in-person showing or a completed live video walkthrough with address verification.

I'm an active-duty service member PCSing to [your installation] on orders. I'm happy to provide orders and income verification after we've confirmed the unit is real and available.

Please let me know when we can schedule a verified walkthrough.

[Name]

Pressure to pay before any showing is a top scam and bad-landlord pattern. Polite but firm.

6. Deposit return and itemization

Deposit terms in writing

Hi [Name],

Before we sign, please confirm in writing:

1. Security deposit amount and where it is held
2. State/local timeline for deposit return after move-out
3. That I will receive an itemized list of any deductions
4. Move-in condition documentation process (photos, walk-through form)

We want everything documented at move-in so there are no surprises at PCS-out.

Thank you,
[Name]

Military families often dispute deposits from the next duty station. Lock timeline and itemization rules before move-in.

7. Suspected scam — verify without sending money

Scam verification message

Hi,

I'm interested in the rental at [address]. Before any payment, please provide:

1. Proof you own this property or are the authorized manager (management company name and license if applicable)
2. A live video walkthrough today or tomorrow with the address visible
3. Confirmation that all funds will go through a standard lease and documented payment method — no wire, gift cards, or cash apps

I will also verify the address on the county assessor site and cross-check listing photos.

If you cannot provide the above, I will not proceed.

[Name]

Forces proof or exposes a fake listing. Real owners provide it; scammers ghost or escalate pressure.

8. Move-in date vs. report date

Align lease start to PCS timeline

Hi [Name],

My report-no-later-than date is [DATE], but I'm arriving in the area around [DATE]. Ideal lease start would be [DATE] — about [X] days before or after report.

Can you accommodate a lease start on [DATE]? If not, what is the closest date you can offer?

I'm trying to avoid paying double rent or moving into temporary lodging longer than necessary. Happy to discuss if there's flexibility for a military PCS move.

Thank you,
[Name]

Report-no-later-than dates rarely match lease starts. Ask early — some PMs flex, many don't.

Before you sign

Suggested language only — not legal advice. Have any lease reviewed by base legal (JAG) before you sign.